
Follow the stories of academics and their research expeditions
Headline designed to grab attention (Layout)
Example: “World’s oldest message in a bottle to ever be found finally washes up after 108 years” – This sensational headline appeals to curiosity and wonder, which is typical of human-interest stories.
Personalisation / Human focus
Example: “Marianne Winkler, a retired postal worker, was on holiday when she spotted the unusual bottle…” – The story is told through the experience of a specific individual, making it relatable and engaging.
Quotations to add authenticity and emotion
Example: “My husband, Horst, carefully tried to get the message out of the bottle…” – Direct speech adds a human voice and emotion to the story, enhancing its interest and credibility.
Informal or accessible style
Example: “It was quite a stir when we opened that envelope, as you can imagine.” – The use of idiomatic and conversational language reflects the genre’s aim to be widely accessible and engaging.
Reference to broader cultural context / institutions
Example: “They are now waiting for the Guinness World Records to confirm…” – Referencing well-known institutions gives the story a wider significance and connects the local event to a global audience.
Chronological narrative structure
Example: The story unfolds in the order events occurred — from finding the bottle, opening it, sending the message, to the Marine Biological Association’s reaction. This step-by-step sequence is typical of storytelling in human-interest features.
Use of specific and vivid detail
Example: “The clear glass bottle had a note inside bearing only the words: ‘Break the bottle.’” – Such descriptive detail draws readers in and paints a vivid picture of the discovery.
Emotive or sensational language
Example: “It was quite a stir when we opened that envelope…” – The phrase “quite a stir” evokes excitement and adds drama, enhancing reader engagement.
Historical or scientific reference to provide background
Example: “…staff recognised the bottle was one of 1,020 released into the North Sea between 1904 and 1906 as part of a project…” – Giving context through history or science grounds the story in factual interest and boosts credibility.
Closing with a twist or unresolved curiosity
Example: “They are now waiting for the Guinness World Records to confirm…” – Ending on a note of anticipation sustains reader interest and encourages follow-up or further reading.
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